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I wasn't trying to back talk, and I apologize if I came off badly, I'm just not used to such vague critiques and lack of suggestions. And I wasn't talking ...

You didn't explain to me how I "shoved it" in your faces, so I'd like a clearer understanding. And actually those two things are not what the poem is about, ...

Unfortunately the entire poem would not work with a few of the trimmings; it's surreal style, and that's not debris, they're illusions. It's supposed to create a picture in your ...