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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Waiting

    Wow! You've really done a great job. The reader can actually feel those emotions. The whole poem is amazing. Just didn't get this- why did you start middle school with ...

    Jul 28, 2019

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Hello

    Woah!! Never knew a ‘ hello’ could do so much. Hope I also find such a guy. 😂 Returning to the main point, I really liked your poem because: 1) ...

    Jul 22, 2019

  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction
    Re: The Brightest Witch of Her Age

    YEAHHHH!! Finally reading a poem on my one of the most favourite characters. You really have a creative mind Bhaavya. Every line depicts her. Even on reading the title the ...

    Jul 20, 2019

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Fall on deaf ears

    Wow! What a lovely poem. Sooo relatable! The emotions and feelings are so well- expressed. The reader can visualise herself in the situation mentioned in the poem- that of deep ...

    Jul 20, 2019

  • Hi, buddy! You have penned an extraordinary poem there. Its beauty lies in the content which is soo relatable. Just didn't understand a few points. And there's nothing I can ...

    Jun 30, 2019

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Forgive Me

    Hey Katnes! This was a very congenial poem. Loveable yet heart- wrenching. Though it isn't clear who broke the heart, since both are suffering. Was it you who did it ...

    Jun 28, 2019

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: the honors girl

    A very nice poem you have penned there. It is soo much relatable and the flow adds to its beauty. You have really picked out the best words anyone can ...

    Jun 27, 2019

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other
    Re: Deleted

    Hi. This poem was one of its kind,actually. And the best thing about it is that it is sooo relatable. Even when reading it, i can feel the anger and ...

    Jun 25, 2019

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Forever

    Hello Fabiha! Your poem was really amazing. The metaphors and rhyming was awesome. There could not have been better words to express such a wow! Poem. Though the rhyming of ...

    Jun 25, 2019

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Lily

    Hello! I must say this poem wasn’t like anything I have ever read before. The description of the girl was so realistic and the poem so relatable. Though there are ...

    Jun 25, 2019

  • Hello ! This poem IS a legend ,Silvermoon! Very relatable and awfully true for those who really don't care about others' feelings. They really are very mean ,aren't they? Just ...

    Jun 15, 2019

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Anxiety

    Hello Jade! I really enjoyed reading this poem as have many cause its wonderful. You have so beautifully expressed what lies behind our fears and what behind that. It is ...

    Jun 14, 2019

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: A "Friend"

    Hello ToxicAnglerFish! A very well-written poem.The idea of calling depression a 'friend' is very unique . No doubt depression is the truest or most honest feeling ! 'Even if its ...

    Jun 13, 2019

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Until then

    Hello Silvermoon! This poem is really well written , I particularly enjoyed the rhyming and the vivid descriptions. Empathy has died with love, how fearsome- What monster have I become? ...

    Jun 12, 2019

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: This is Goodbye

    Hello! We meet again. I truly liked your poem and it seems to me you are really in love( or rather were)! It isn't a good feeling to be left ...

    Jun 12, 2019

There are darknesses in life and there are lights, and you are one of the lights, the light of all lights.
— Bram Stoker