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Thank you. :)

He makes his home out of a cardboard box, with a smile glued to his face that he gives out to anyone, anyone that passes by. He spends his days ...

Thanks borntoshop! No, those where not supposed to be there, I just didn't catch them. I'll edit. Thank you again!

Thanks, both of you! StoryWeaver13: This was never meant to be a completely happy-go-lucky piece. I wanted to explore the rougher side of childhood, yet still weave parts of my ...

Children are supposed to be happy, but that wasn't the case for me. I was a solemn little girl with no time for the frivolities and social activities other children ...

Thank you for the review! I'll keep what you've said in mind and possibly tweak it a little here and there.

I saw him there But a lonely little boy His eyes wide and glassy With unshed tears 'Little boy,' I hastened to say Seeing New Yorkers hustle by this little ...

Mummy is there because it's the British way of saying Mom, or Mommy. Other than that, thanks for the review!

I am riveted by the thin lines of blood that trails down your arms You scream you scream, 'God help me!' I am riveted by the thin lines of blood ...

I like it, but I nitpick. :) heart-rate moniter should be heart rate monitor (no hyphen and monitor is spelled with an o) I actually think that's all I found ...

A Venetian Vera Wang. Too many V's, Vandaris. >.> Haha.

He's on the cardboard box, hon, not in it. :) Thank you for your opinion, anyway. ;)

He sniffled and shifted on the cardboard box. Any minute he felt it would burst and his ass would be owned by the cold concrete ground, but at the moment ...

This sounds perfect. I'd love to submit something. I'll be sure to do so. :)

Aw, thank you both. :) I'll take the advice. p.s. Lupin totally rocks padfoot. But Sirius so rocks better.