anonymoussoul7

In the process of editing...will repost when finished.

Alright, thanks for the clarification. I appreciate your feedback and hope I've encompassed your suggestions in the next chapter I've just finished editing. I seem to be having a bit ...

Thank you everyone for you feedback so far. I've tried to tone the melodramatics down as you all suggested. I purposely made the excerpt dramatic, although I do not intend ...

For all the beauty that life holds, I see no grace in what we've sold, For oh-so great prosperity, We've sacrificed humanity. We hold things to be great and true, ...

Author's Note: This is, I believe, my final draft to my prologue for this story. Tell me what you think about all the changes and such. I tried to minimize ...