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annwell

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ruined My Life

    hello there... i like the have lots of meaning... I'm the one who's ruined my life.~in this part, i suggest you to change it to " I'm the one who ...

    Aug 13, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Different to Make a Difference

    you are definitely a filipino. this is my review... the plot of the story is nice. However, it lack of emotion. if i am going to rate this according to ...

    Aug 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Midnight

    i read it and it was very, totally awesome.The story is incredible. “She’s going to kill me,” Dahlia thought.( " ) ~you forgot to put a quotation mark. I don’t ...

    Aug 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chapter One (DRAFT)

    i read the novel and i can say it nice.. you improve a lot... my full review will be posted later..cause i don't have much time left.. also, i notice ...

    Aug 9, 2010


Memories, left untranslated, can be disowned; memories untranslatable can become someone else’s story.
— YiYun Li