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Re: Ruined My Life
hello there... i like the have lots of meaning... I'm the one who's ruined my life.~in this part, i suggest you to change it to " I'm the one who ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Different to Make a Difference
you are definitely a filipino. this is my review... the plot of the story is nice. However, it lack of emotion. if i am going to rate this according to ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: Midnight
i read it and it was very, totally awesome.The story is incredible. “She’s going to kill me,” Dahlia thought.( " ) ~you forgot to put a quotation mark. I don’t ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One (DRAFT)
i read the novel and i can say it nice.. you improve a lot... my full review will be posted later..cause i don't have much time left.. also, i notice ...
Aug 9, 2010
