anneonomus

Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it!

Thank you for your review! I like how you suggested the employee take some time off, seeing as this poem is partly based on a true story. (I was the ...

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Thank you for your review, I'm glad the story resonated with you!

Thank you so much for your review, I really appreciate it!

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Thank you for your review! As to your question about the life-preserver, I did intend for the metaphor to imply that the parents are at risk (or at least believe ...

Hi, thank you so much for your review! I'm really glad you liked the poem and I really appreciate you pointing out the elements that struck you! Your read on ...

Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate everything you said! Also thank you for saying you hope things will get better soon, that's really sweet of you! ...

Oops, ignore the places where it says "%u2014", those are supposed to be em-dashes but I guess I can't use that character in comments lol.

Hi Wolf, thank you for the review! You're right, this poem definitely does come from a place of hurt%u2014 though sort of a convoluted one, as the poem is also ...

Thank you so much! I will definitely try playing around with the imagery and punctuation!

Thank you for your review, I'm so glad you liked my poem! I love your notes about the punctuation and formatting, I'll definitely try playing around with those! (Also I ...

Hello, thank you for your review! I'll definitely keep your note about changing the description of fire in mind! Though I would ask (and I'm not quite sure how to ...

Hi, thank you so much for your review! I'm so glad you liked it, and your analysis of the meaning is pretty spot-on (it even helped me understand my own ...