annaseale1998

Really pretty! I love the glow coming off the sand, and the sky looks like it's coming straight from a painting :) Beautiful. -Anna

Welcome to YWS :) So, at first, this seemed like a normal murderer, but is it really a vampire? Because you said 'and gorged itself on her life'. What really ...

This was inspired by 'The Rime of the Ancient Mariner', and I wrote it my school music lesson, scribbling under the desk :D Wake me up straight from my dreams ...

'On a lovely Summer day.' Shouldn't it be 'On a lovely Summer's day'? Also, I wish there weren't as many spaces between the stanzas, I think it breaks it up ...

Just part of a fun project I did for school :) In a land before the creation of stars and planets, there once lived a powerful being. His name was ...

Is this about a ghost? Sorry if it isn't, but that's the only guess I have about what's going on here. I loved the overall idea, it was short and ...

Whoa - that's good. The words are so strange, in a good way, because it draws you in. I think you do need to sort out the letters and placing ...

To Alex. I'll never forget what you told me. Love you, always. 'I'll laugh, pick you up, know that I am there to guide you. When you're lost, call my ...

My favourite was the cow. He was so adorable! Looked like he'd just woken up :) The first one was good, I liked the ripples of the water, the reflection ...

Warm cup of milk and honey - yuck! Good poem, sweet like honey :) I like how you repeated the words 'Milk and honey'. Short and nice, and made me ...

Really cool! I agree, I wouldn't have been able to read the first word if the comment above hadn't said. The effects were awesome, and if you did do them ...

I love the last two lines, taking an old happy-tuned song and putting a really sad twist on to it. I think if you had made it any longer, it ...

We try to smile as we descend into doom, neither one of us daring to talk in fear of what would come out our mouths. Those who have everything to ...

Firstly- Whoa. There's a lot going on! You really have to look closely to see what's going on here. I like the use of blurring the words of the title, ...

Firstly, I have to say that this was really, REALLY good. I like how the person evolved during the poem, and how she ended up happy at the end. The ...