annaseale1998

Wade through swamps of your own creation Then wonder why they're there Make your claim, your declaration Pretend like somehow you care Listen to all the sounds you've made Bombs ...

Really good :) I liked it a lot! The rhythm kept up well, and I didn't find myself tripping over any of the sentences. I couldn't find any faults with ...

A poem I wrote when I was traveling down a river in a Malaysian boat, and me and my mum were watching fireflies. The driver, when we stopped near the ...

This was really good! I had to read it twice, because I didn't understand it, though, and even when I had finished I still didn't get the ending. I don't ...

WOW! This was REALLY good! I loved how at the end, where the person's life is a 'lifeless shell' but it still says 'And my life is perfect'. I literally ...

Yeah, I couldn't see the pictures :( I couldn't see what the last two were about, but from what I got from the first, it looked really good! (At least ...

This was nice - made me smile. I loved the last lines, really wrapped it up. It was nice that you had a generally sad poem, but somehow you gave ...

It wasn't inspired by a person, just a conversation. I'm glad you like it :D

Leave me hanging, gasping for breath Leave me hanging over my death Leave me falling as you walk away I've fallen through, to black, to grey You've left me with ...

I put the syrup thing in because my parents always tell me never to drink from the cough syrup, because you'll get really sick. One of my sisters drank a ...

Firstly: '...and the director his own life scene.' Shouldn't that be 'OF his own life scene'? And also, there are lots of errors in paragraph six. Secondy, I loved this. ...

I enjoyed reading it, although the only problem I could find with this, other than the gazzillion spelling and grammar errors, is that this isn't really a story. It's more ...

Never, never, never again Never will I play with Mum's scalpel pen Never will I rumage through Daddy's drawers And play around with his pair of saws Never again will ...

That's so cool! I struggled to see the whole picture, because it wouldn't fit on my computer screen, but I still got most of it. It took me a while ...

I liked this because the explanations.. well, thay basically explained everything. When I read vampire books, they almost always never explain why vampires are vampires. I thought that you could ...