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Re: Everyday the Usual Thing
Most of the time my eyes would focus on the computer with my glasses reflecting the computer screen. Reading books I'd never finish with adventures that need to be coninued. ...
Jul 2, 2010 -
Re: Dawn Poetry 1
It looks like I am not the only one who has to fix my punctuation also, as I was reading the comments :D Reading out loud does help, as my ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: On Top of A City
Not sure if this is a good poem no matter how times I read it over -_- so i would like to listen to any advice if you have any ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: On Top of A City
with a few seconds until the sun rises I see the mist of the morning covering the city like the ocean with sparkling water matching with the clouds and sky ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: When I Dream
It would be better if I wasn't sleep, it would be better if my eyes weren't close. In this good dream, When I want to continue the adventure, when I ...
Jun 11, 2010
