angelwings13

I thought I rather dramatic, to be honest. Grammar error Bheind her, the door clanged open. She looked at Morgan’s body on the stone floor. She is gone, Another Grammar ...

This was a fun read! Very interesting and made me think about if their dreams took them elsewhere or was he kidnapped and forced into the jungle with the others. ...

It is pretty good, but the grammar irked me. Getting past the grammar, I really think that this has great potential to become something awesome. You did an excellent job ...

This was very believable and convincing, especially in an entry like form. After reading it through it even made me wish the story was longer and that I knew more ...

This is very strong and bold. I think the part that really drew me into the poem was when you said " speaking a language made of tears " It's ...

I love the start of this, but i'm not certain where this will lead without reading a bit more. The character development is very strong and firm. I think you ...