angelwings13

The beginning was a bit weak for me. It is VERY wordy and was too much for me, so I wasn't very interested in finishing reading it. Try to make ...

The best books i've read would have to be andre aggasi's biography, under the dome, and just after sunset.

The introduction was great! It was very sweet. I loved it!

This was very believable and convincing, especially in an entry like form. After reading it through it even made me wish the story was longer and that I knew more ...

This is very strong and bold. I think the part that really drew me into the poem was when you said " speaking a language made of tears " It's ...

I love the start of this, but i'm not certain where this will lead without reading a bit more. The character development is very strong and firm. I think you ...

My story is about a girl moving to a small town from a big city and meeting three unlikely people during a summer class. She becomes friends with them and ...