angelwings13

He swiftly turned the corner and made it out to the busy streets. I glanced in the mirror and saw the white van not far behind. A window on the ...

@Calligrpahy Yeah, I've reviewed some things on here.

Hey ^_^ I'm not super new, but I've been lurking around here and finally decided to come out of my shell. What's up?

This was a fun read! Very interesting and made me think about if their dreams took them elsewhere or was he kidnapped and forced into the jungle with the others. ...

I'll check our writing and review! Thanks for reviewing my work. Yeah, I was rushing in class to get it posted, but i'm going to go back in an edit ...

This isn't super polished because I wrote it as the idea came to me, so let me know what you think. Thanks. Chapter 1 The man at the bar sat ...

I added a full portion more on the first part (which is his childhood). I'm going to remake this into a journal like form and its going to switch from ...

I'm going to post all my writing up top in my first post.

@Angela 1. Thanks for the tidbit, I didn't know the beginning was a bit vague. I'll clarify that up later. 2. I'll correct that error 3. He is expressing his ...

Thanks for the read. I might tweak the opening sentence so that it flows much better. I'm going to post part 1 of the story in a bit. I'm very ...

thanks guys for the reviews, but ive stopped writing this story for awhile and probably wont get back to it until much later. thanks so much for the support.

This was stellar! I really enjoyed reading this and I haven't seen the YouTube Video, but now i'm wanting to. p.s. You upload a profile picture by going to my ...

WOW. This was very GOOD!!!!!!!! I was really on edge while reading this.

It is pretty good, but the grammar irked me. Getting past the grammar, I really think that this has great potential to become something awesome. You did an excellent job ...

Alright, I can't wait to read the rest. It is fairly interesting.