angelwings13

This was very fun to read, but it was also very touching and warm to the heart. I would love to hear this with music! Great work.

I thought I rather dramatic, to be honest. Grammar error Bheind her, the door clanged open. She looked at Morgan’s body on the stone floor. She is gone, Another Grammar ...

Thanks, how do you think I should break up the paragraphs?

Thanks so much for the review. Ava is immature? At what points do you reference? I'll try to clear it up because some of the points of Ava's actions has ...

Wow, this is very touching and deep. I loved it. I don't see any major mistakes and I don't really have much to critique about it. Keep up the great ...

A little bit more descriptive and an evident plot to where the story is leading would be a very good draw in for me. I had mixed emotions on this ...

Very strong and realistic in my opinion. The characters were very believable and held on to my attention though some parts were a bit predictable.

This was really gripping. I loved it! Some mistakes were already pointed out by previous reviewers so I don't feel the need to reiterate that. This really held my interest, ...

Caden BEEP BEEP BEEP I hit my alarm clock and opened my eyes to see that it read 4 am. Crawling out of bed, I got up and walked to ...

Okay, so one of my main characters isn't going to meet his window character until he reaches a certain destination. Which won't be until the middle of the story. Is ...

If I did it in the diary format then I could introduce all my main characters besides the protagonist early on AND give the reader time to learn their personalities. ...

I am writing a novel, but i'm putting 4 POV's of the 4 main characters including the villain in the story. The thing is, is that my protagonist is pretty ...

We sat at a booth in the far back where the light was low and an emergency exit loomed near. I checked the clock and it was already 1 am. ...

Welcome! Nice to have you here!

Hi Mary! My tip is to just lurk for awhile and make friends, as well as ask questions. I usually lurk to see how people have formatted the story, so ...