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angelle716

  • Writing Tips Re: Tips for writing a murder

    I'm writing an assassin story and I need help with writing the first kill scene. Any tips?

    Dec 25, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Do your characters talk to you?

    My character talk to me too. I fee like i am inside them at times... So i can control them outside of stories. >:D

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Rose Petal Liquid

    It was lovely, the formate could be better but wonderful. I would agree with some about the letter part that confused me really badly but other than that everything was ...

    Jul 30, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Blood

    It was amazing i loved it nothing i would change. Not really my style so im surprised i liked it. Keep it up ^-^

    Jul 30, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Do You Know Me?

    This is amazing. It is full of emotion and i just love that. Sure some may say its too personal but i dont think that. Your doing great keep it ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Haven't Thought Of a Title for This Piece Yet :(

    It wasnt really my style but the lines and wording was great. I mean i dont really see a reason or point in it but it could work for some ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Now I Ask

    I like it, because it had emotion in it but it could of use more emotion. I could image it in my head thats good but it could have been ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: I'm a badass, your a badass, so naturally we want to kill ea

    It all started when I was five. I was normal but then they took me away and gave me my gift. Here is what I mean by they, the army. ...

    Jul 23, 2011


You unlock this door with the key of imagination. Beyond it is another dimension: a dimension of sound, a dimension of sight, a dimension of mind. You’re moving into a land of both shadow and substance, of things and ideas. You’ve just crossed over into… the Twilight Zone.
— Rod Serling