angelicahandover

I like this one more than the other one I commented on. ^^ It was full of emotion and I could already imagine the scene in my head as I ...

Hey there! ^^ It was a great poem! :D I really like your work! Anyway, here are some mistakes I found. (I think. :S) Now I must say fairwell, 'Now ...

Haha. It's not the last chapter. Pleased to know that you like the story so much. ^^ Thank you! :D And of course I'll check out your poems! ^^ Seeya ...

The overwhelming smell of coffee filled Claire's nostrils. She leant back in her chair and exhaled loudly. "Claire?" "Claire? Are you alright?" Claire blinked and looked at her two friends, ...

Aww... It's a pity this wonderful story had to end. I really enjoyed reading it. Unfortunately... All stories come to an end. It's the sad truth. Ah well... Well then... ...

Great job! :) I'll crit another day. Sorry, I'm supposed to be writing a speech on 'Why I love English' for some competition that my teachers have signed me up ...

Edited. :)

"Cheers to you, my friend!" Glasses were raised and everyone in the ballroom was standing, facing the bride and groom. The man who had just spoken was tall and handsome. ...

Haha. Hey, thanks! I just woke up thanks to this story! :) This really grabbed my attention. It seemed rushed, but it was good. Seriously. ^^ I loved it! :)

“Keep it she yelled back!” "Keep it!" she yelled back. Heart racing she screamed for joy. Rollercoaster were so exhilarating. After riding the Mountain Serpent a few more times she ...

I loved it! Please write more! Apart from a few mistakes that others have pointed out, it was a great story! I'd love to read chapter 2. Hope you post ...

A rainbow was spread wide across the sky. Little Clara looked at the rainbow, her eyes full of amazement. "There's a pot of gold at the end of every rainbow." ...

Hey! :) Good day to you! :D You really remind me of my best friends. Both are introverts, but they act really hyper and outgoing around people they know well, ...

:D I still can't wait for the next part. :) Great job. XD

The yellowed piece of paper was framed up on the wall. I looked up at it and smiled. I sat on the old rocking chair as I watched my grandchildren ...