angelchet92

the point of the poem was awesome. i'm not sure if you meant to do it but there was like 2 stanzas that didn't add to the rhyming scheme of ...

The poem was back and forth but it was dark and yes i know me saying that is redundant but i liked it. I do write but i don't post ...

I liked it a lot. It was pretty chaotic just as you said it would be but i did like it so much. I saw a couple of messages in ...

It was great but i do have a question about stanza 6 line 4 "hate comes fast to wring me" what exactly does that mean?

i like the emotions put into it. In my opion it was great and i can relate to the pain in it so that made me understand the feelings more.

i like the emotions put into it. In my opion it was great and i can relate to the pain in it so that made me understand the feelings more.

I like the poem. The morbidity of it was intriguing. But it kinda seems like you left out part of the story.