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Re: Change of Heart chapter 2
2 December Ever since my birthday two months ago, me and Declan have been inseparable. Mum found out I have a boyfriend, but she doesn’t know who he is or ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: writing essay
Umm... I'm not sure what to say to this. I guess you're just trying to make a point by googling writing essay then copying and pasting it but no offence, ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Not just Child's Play
Wow, I really like this so far. You are a really good writer. However, it's so many words I never got to read the whole thing, but the first three ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Hello. (Contest entry)
This is a well written story. Although, no offence, if you work on it and used other words for something to make it sound so much better would be good. ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Do you write every day?
I do, I love writing my novels, I usually write about 2 pages a day, which is enough for me and it helps me set a task or focus! :wink:
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Change of Heart chapter 1
1 October What makes the most perfect birthday? The presents you‘ve always wanted? Your loving family and friends around you? You and your boyfriend having the best dinner you could ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: your great might
A s life shall turn , all will burn at the sight , O f your great might , N o one will learn , and their hearts will yearn ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Autumn
This is very creative, and really nice. I like your style, and don't worry, I do know autumned isn't a word and some people would nit-pick that, but I think ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: About Moi
I am angel007angel. I am 14 years old and my birthday is on the 25th of October. I love Jedward (I am obsessed) and also very boy obsessed. I love ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Fears
Sorry, yeah I do tend to write fast and commas look nice to me while I'm writing. I'm glad you liked it, thanks for commenting.
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: A New Discovery
This was actually written by me a few months ago where I sent it into Bliss Magazine, and it was published in August I think. This is the original. Enjoy. ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Wooing in the Desert
Wow, this is really deep. I love things like this and I really love how you worded this. Well done. I do have no nit-picks, but I want to put ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Fears
Ever since I was eight years old, I’ve always been afraid of those creatures. The ones that stare you in the eyes and don’t blink. It’s frightening, creepy. My mother ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Why I Write..
This is good. But I am confused on what the purpose of this is. Is it a poem? Or just something to prove people? I'm very unsure and I'm not ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: The Meaning Of Love - Chapter One
Well done, this is a good idea. You really need to check over your spellings and make sure you notice that real names such as Charlotte has a capital letter. ...
Oct 12, 2011
