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I love this. I loved the beginning and the middle the best. It's one of the best poetry I've actually read on YWS, and I review mostly poetry as I ...

This is possibly my first poem I've ever wrote ever that I cared about and thought about. It only took about 10 minutes but I quite liked it, I welcome ...

This is the most random, funniest things I've on here. It's so silly and crazy it made me lol so much. You're a good writer, especcially for making something that ...

I didn't like this very much. I didn't like the hands part that you done. I know you must have spent a long time doing this and I respect that. ...

You are a really good drawer and there is no way I could draw like that! Although, I'm not into drawings like this anyway, and don't seem to get the ...

Hmmm... I liked it, I could tell you put a lot of thought into it. Half way through I was confused on what was going on though I still carried ...

I noticed a few grammar issues here. I'm afraid I am in a picky mood so I am really sorry. The one person I can relie on. In red should ...

I can't say I like this so much. But I can't say I hate this. I do think it's pretty good. I have to say I liked your sentences in ...

You have done the girl right. I liked it and it's so something I would read, being a 15 year old girl. I did like it and most of the ...

3 December Declan gave me a call straight after he arrived in Manchester. I could tell he was hurrying me to hang up, as he said there was a hot ...

This is very deep and I liked it. But I have to be picky on the way you laid it out, I didn't really get a good feel for it ...

The book Wolf Brother was written by Michelle Paver which is part of the series, Chronicles of Acient Darkness. I like her books so I created this scene based on ...

I really enjoyed this. Yes, it is quite dark but I liked it. Maybe you could put the top part before your title (where all the smiley faces are) in ...

This is really good. You may need some more work on it and more thought. Also, even though it is nowhere near the poem itself, the spelling in spoiler needs ...

This needs to be expanded. Way too short and very hard to review when you only have four lines to comment on. You seriously need to put more effort in ...