andrew.j.m

I should say, to all of you who read this, this is only a segment of a much much longer story. I don't throw random characters into a room and ...

Theres been time when I just stare at my work trying to figure this one out. Thanks, you just saved me some time :] Andrew.

When you're ready to grow up, call me. When you're done fishing for compliments, thats when you can start looking for advice in me. If you're over all your crushes ...

The way you described Jenny was great. It shows the hatred for her in a slightly humorous form. At first I liked the first part better, but by the end ...

Lalaland is cute, and Advil PM is funny. Maybe you could use both? Something like "to the shores of Lalaland, where the waves (beach?, I'm not sure if Advil PM ...

This is great stuff. So many people want to be what the world wants them to be. When we accept ourselves for who and what we are, then we can ...

This is some great stuff. I like the word choice and the ideas. Your word choice uses words that we all know, just don't use to often. I love the ...

I don't have any deep insights on this, just that I thought that this was going to be some dramatic poem about a girl that looks in the mirror and ...

I'm glad that your having fun cheering. I think you could have incorporated that stereotypes against cheerleaders are wrong a little bit more. But good luck this year with your ...

I like your ideas on here, and I think people aren't posting because they are offended that you don't share the belief that a stranger is a friend you haven't ...

She did, she looked at him and smiled. "Where's Gabby fit into this?" "She's going to be what you can't be for me. Her and I are going to give ...

I like how it doesn't say that it's the father thats with this person until close to the end. It is really good. But if I had to make a ...

Anything you work your ass off to acquire is just something else that will be taken away from you, whether it be stolen, lost, forgotten, or you die. Nothing lasts ...

I see where you're coming from on this one. I'm a guy. I'm in highschool. So i see all the guys treating the girls badly. Always doubting them, and cheating ...

I was expecting the flame to start to cry flames and set his surroundings on fire, but I like this ending better. The thought of being alone in the world. ...