andrew.j.m

It's really short, but it really makes me want to read what comes next. I like how Adam is referred to as "Love" by "you". It shows that they probably ...

Towards the middle, I have to admit, I almost did start to cry a little bit. But since I'm a guy, I refused to acknowledge the tear leaving its trail ...

Ya, I need more variety in what I post. I know I know. My PSA's are all the same. And this Jesse story was written when I was like 12 ...

If you ever read the book Lullaby, there's a part in there where it talks about how if art is done well enough, perfectly, it can put people into a ...

I feel bad because I only send you good things about your work, and can't think of anything helpful to say. The only helpful thing I can say is....keep it ...

You amaze me. This poem actually scared me a little. I had to fight off the urge to look in the corners of the room for something coming at me. ...

This was great. I looked at it and thought it was way to short to be any good, but reading it...and wow. At first I thought this was going to ...

So. You're back in my life. I say, this time, it's different. You say, there was something wrong last time? Well... I guess you were just being yourself. Can I ...

Alright, there are some spelling things you need to look into, but I'm not good with spelling. But I like how this is a different perspective than the last one, ...

Okay, not going to lie, when I read that people's hair stood up on the back of their neck when they read this, I thought...."Some one's full of herself..." I ...

This was pretty cute, and I think you were just going for a little funny verse, so good job!

Remember the time we first met? I do. It was the fourth of July. Remember how I was so afraid to talk to you that I kept my eyes on ...

Jesse ran his fingers through his hair as he sat on the curb of the smoggy suburb, looking left and right. He laid on his back and rubbed his black ...

So I really like the ending, the way you describe how he pretty much controls how you feel without even trying to. I think you really hit the nail on ...

Usually I don't like reading things like this, but this one kept my eyes pretty busy reading every word. So good job. It sounds like a good start to a ...