andrew.j.m

"My name is Jason. I've been here two and a half years. I don't care about people. Love isn't real. If any of you were choking in the hallway, thrashing ...

White. It's all white. The walls are white. The floor is white. The doors, the lights, the sofas and chairs. They're all white. Walk down the white hallways and look ...

Dayum. This was long. But I read the whole thing, so it has to be good. I really really liked it. A lot. The character's are...deep. Like I know them. ...

Damn. This is some great stuff. I love how it isn't mushy love stuff. I needed a break from that. I like where this is going. I have nothing bad ...

Please read the original one (called "Remember The Time") and tell me which one you like better. The first one is a lot shorter though. ****----***---**--*- Remember the time we ...

I really really really like this. It has a lot of emotion. I like how you talk about wanting to be a kid again, but know it's impossible. The line ...

Im digging this more and more. Make the baby be what you want it to be : ]

There's me. Ya, pretty useless and pathetic. My hair is a mess, my pants are full of holes, and I spend more nights alone in my room staring at a ...

This is good. Emotions are depicted, and I hope that you sent this to the son of a bitch you did this to you :] I'm not going to critique ...

My exgirlfriend (I hate referring to her as if she was only part of my past. To tell the truth, I still love the girl) she said her boyfriend had ...

Don't change anything in this. Everything fits perfectly. At first I didn't like the line "churning in the mud" because it didn't really seem to go with the flow of ...

The only problem I have with this is the you mention Twilight. I'm sorry, but I refuse to read that book. I'm not saying it's a bad book, I just ...

"Try not to think of him" I love that part. So far it's great. I don't know much about vampires, but this has me intrigued. :] Andrew.

Usually as soon as it becomes apparent that there are people who aren't "human" in a story, I just close the book and look for another. But not with this ...

So I'm not the best at editing spelling and grammar, so I'm just going to tell you what I think about the ideas. I like where this is going. It ...