andreaj811

The meaning = trying to figure out who you really are That's why I wrote those whole two stanzas about the question "Who am I?"

I did this for my creative writing class and it was based off of having our first or last line being Walt Whitman's famous line "I sound my barbaric yawp ...

I like how you didn't end each line like the end of a sentence. Like you put "morphs into" as a line and then moved onto a new sentence, then ...

I absolutely love this You obviously used a ton of poetic devices like imagery, personification, simile, etc. and I think that's great. I loved your detail in the imagery you ...

wow i really like this maybe it is because i'm all about not letting a guy walk all over you? haha l I think you were really descriptive and i ...

excellent I really like this I like how you just jumped right into it and I think repeating things like "come back" really add emphasis. I really felt like you ...

***I wrote this a while ago, but it's still one of my favorites. Let me know what you guys think! :) I climbed up the cracked wooden stairs, checking both ...

really nice job! i think with a few more revisions this poem could be really great. I like your use of alliteration with "repetition of regret runs..." and you used ...

Even though there were very few words, I felt I could picture what you were talking about. However, I still felt it was a little choppy in some places. You ...