andoreiii

Thanks for the review. I'm happy you were able to receive it well! The points you suggested were able to make me realize that I could've been able to immerse ...

Thanks for commenting! Yeah, the person is at a fair, and I probably should've described it better. It's actually in a school, and the bench was in a hallway, but ...

Hi! Thanks for commenting. For that one line you were talking about, I was trying to make it seem like no one was able to make the person happy, but ...