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The prologue has everything a prologue should have; the mystery, the attractiveness and the ability to plant within the reader the will to read on. I will most certainly be ...

Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful! Your writing will not cease to amuse me, I have not come across a talent as pure as yours yet. The story took me right in, from ...

I swear to God, this had to be one of the funniest pieces that I have read in a long long time. Your lyrics are simple yet expressive and detailed. ...

Hello dear, I saw your post, and so, here I am; answering your call. I enjoyed reading it to be honest. Your attention to detail at the start took me ...

Although I'm in my happy mood, I decided to write something depressing. Anyways... I gasped as I opened the bathroom door, the sight was utterly horrible. It absolutely tore my ...

Hey, You're poem is personal indeed. It is touching at heart and edible to the eyes. The simplicity of the words and rhymes are what make it enjoyable to read. ...

Hey, You're poem is original but poorly constructed. The structure in the stanzas is not a walk in the park, and it gets frustrating to reread everything in order to ...

Hey, You're short story is wonderfully constructed with an amazing attention put into detail; You made me aware of the time, setting, characters and feelings quite easily. Furthermore, you followed ...

Hello Shagy, I actually enjoyed it. You're poem is using an original approach which I have not encountered in a long while. The way you integrated Poker in your love ...

Hey, I enjoyed reading this. The piece is not original though, many stories circle the same idea. I liked how you took an amazing interest in detail, girl. The portrayal ...

This made me laugh so hard! When I reached the bottom where it says respective piles my throat just roared out with laughter. You had me with an open mouth ...

I really liked the disturbing images you portrayed to me. Although you had me lost at the start, it all then came clearer as I read further on. I still ...

My nightmare of a life G rass was breaking under my feet, my throat so dry I had nothing to swallow, yet, I did. It was a night in mid ...

Dear Astronaut, Your story is grasping the attention of my busy imagination. I really cannot find a better way to describe it. Though I have a few pointers. First, you ...

I LOVE IT! When are you going to add to it? Its absolutely perfect, I really cannot find anything wrong with it. Reading it from start to finish; I could ...