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Hey there! Without the formalities and boring intros, let me get straight to it. The room was dark, as it always was had been , and as he he'd always ...

Hello there old friend :D Been a while, I've been looking forward to this chapter. I'll start with the corrections and my opinion at the end. loving the way it ...

Hey there, You're story seems original and with an explicit plot. I am looking forward to reading the rest of it. I must point out to you though, you need ...

Hey! I just came across this. Well being a pharmacist, I can tell you that Iodide or Sodium give yellow stains. As for permanent, I would suggest Lead Iodide which ...

Hey all, Well what brought me here was the boredom that the shuffle button caused me. Not only does it direct me to posts which I reviewed already, it directs ...

You're story is wonderful. It is pointless, but full of metaphors. Its shortness makes it even better. The final sentence was the best. On the other hand, I have quite ...

Hey there. Its a very well written story. No matter how short it appears to be, its quite alright. The metaphors you're getting through are quite clear to me. I ...

Hey, its me again. The prologue brings me here I guess, so lets see :) As the they made there their as Thunderstorm approached his him slowly Here you either ...

Well.. we did try :(

You're story is original, and I loved it. Please excuse the corrections, but they were necessary. You'll need to work on better sentence structure. Picture the sentence in your head ...

Hello, You're poem is not only creative and powerful, it is original. The way you subliminally portray the idea of fighting to be childish is amazing. I had not looked ...

Well hello there! You're story is as wonderful as it gets. The plot is the perfect type; the one which leaves the reader wanting to have more. There is one ...

Wonderfully constructed and very original, for me at least. Reading it at first I assumed what everyone would; its a person. I then realized that you were actually describing an ...

Where are you going with this!? You keep twisting the plot, taking it to a higher level. Beware Drunk, when you reach the top going back down will be hard. ...

Amazing! Absolutely wonderful work. The diversity of the colliding events is bewildering. You send my head into a buzz and shake it to sense repeatedly with the scenes. This is ...