anamachi.boricua

I find this piece beautiful overall. Now I will tell you the negatives first and then the positives. 1. The background is a problem, even though the focus of the ...

Wow, this was really good. Okay first I am going to start with the criticism and then continue with the praise. First it looks as if you completely ran out ...

Chapter 2 Translations: Ay Dios mio- Oh my God Que extrano- how strange. Ok mental recap on my birthday so far...I am an apparent nature lover, I'm and early riser, ...

Wow, this looks very good. I will start off with a little critique and then I will bring on the praise. I think that the cheek is a little too ...

Thanks, and I agree with you on the pictures I did not realize that I could not put them in the story but only links. I will definently edit that. ...

Okay everyone here is the edited version. Thanks for your support. Enjoy it. Preface March 21, 2008 Have you ever felt---no...known you were different? I'm not talking about physically different, ...

Absolutely beautiful. You have truly captured the power of the movements the horse is making. It looks like if you used pen to draw this if so even more power ...

okay here I go Name: Thalia Age: 18 Description: Other: I am obviously a made up character, we will have to see where I fit in as the story progresses.

Wow, not bad. I will give you my critiques first and then more praise. 1. The way you have drawn her arms makes her look hunched over. 2. Her ears ...

Wow, great job Teddybear22, I think there are some slight grammatical errors but overall the effect of the poem as a whole is powerful. I love the ending questions, it ...

Hey everyone, this is Ann Marie. :D I have to say this place seems really cool. A friend of mine introduced me to young writers society and so far I ...