anabelsinclair

Hi Buggie! Many thanks for the read and review, though my response is so criminally late! As usual, you are incisive with your insight, and your technical critique is always ...

Oooh, I'm intrigued by the suspense...

Hey Deanie, You're always on point with the technical and general critique, thanks again. Infodump is a way to put it; I just couldn't find a way to break it ...

Hi Steampowered, Thanks for the read and review, I'm glad to have made an impression. Yeah, this was a chunky chapter. But sometimes it can't be helped. The pace picks ...

Hi Buggie, Thank you for the R and R, critique and tips. It is muchly appreciated. Yeah, grammar remains my Achilles' hell but I shall overcome! Diversity and complexity: well ...

Deanie, I am awed by your acumen, and appreciate your reads and reviews anytime :) Thank you for thoroughly parsing through my story. I shall cheerfully sew it back up. ...

csr121295 , Thank you for the read and review. It was quite the mixed bag. On one hand ' molten gold ' gave me a Rumpelstiltskin moment. On the other ...

Kevin25a, Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Greatly appreciated.

Deanie, You more than made up for your supposed absence in this review! Thanks for the R and R, and the insight is always appreciated. I will definitely delineate the ...

Oh, no offense taken. I ask because you do such a great work of parsing my work, that you'd point out plot weaknesses.

Buggie, As always, your r and r is greatly appreciated. You noted the use of flashbacks in this work. There are two stories with several connections developing here; my hope ...

JaBurton, Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Greatly appreciated.

Whoa Deanie, I believe this is called an epistle! Thank you?! Really, thanks for the thought out critique, which is always taken to heart.

Hey Chanta! Thanks for the read and review. I guess I'm long winded, and prone to writing epics. It does take time, I confess, mostly due to my very annoying ...

Red, can I call you Red? Thanks for taking time to read and review my work, greatly appreciated. I do hope you stick around.