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This is a great poem! I love it but it could flow a little better near the beggining

They are driving to the vet to put Brownie to sleep. I didn't want to go because I'm afraid I might weep. This dog has been with me since the ...

I like this poem a lot, it suits the season (of course) and the feelings that everyone has when school gets out, the only issue: All your cares and worries ...

Symphonies fall from Branches in swift harmony. Leaves crunch underfoot. The first line of this is a little off rythm, but overall I love this one. Trees bare themselves In ...

I sit on the little cliff on the edge of the forest, waiting on a breeze to blow my seeds along. I’ve been sitting here for years and years. I ...

I really love this! I is excellent and I love your use of imagery. You have a great poetry talent :D and, I am not being sarcastic! :lol:

thanks! I already figured it out, my friend helped me!! :D

okay... I had a problem: The width of a rectangular park is 5m shorter than its length. If the area of the park is 300m². Find the length and the ...

What does... *copies and pastes* hyperpolysyllabicsesquipedalianist mean????

My! What does that even mean? I guess so if its a real word...

Thanks guys! Sonni: Yes pablo would love this poem! :D Everyone is good. Brownie is old, Kuma is wild, and Lola is still very small... Matt Bellamy: Thank you, I'll ...

Wow thanks everyone for all your great crits. About the "scrappy", part, yeah... I'm changing that... Well thanks!!! It really helps!!!

These are both adorable!!!!! I love them!!!! Did your dad get you the bunny?

Work, work work, I thought this should have another comma after the second work. I loved your poem! It is really well worded and it has great rhythm. I think ...

I think this s a really nice poem, but I agree that it needs a better rhythm. But good work, it is really nice!!! Bravo! :smt041