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OMG i swear you guys put tears into my eyes.. hey that rhymed :P thank you all so much, your comments mean the world to me!

awww you express a deep honest and intimate relationsip with your sister. You hold true love and utmost care for her, and that makes you a unique special person. Good ...

This is really strange and awkwardly sad. You seem to be living in a paradox of constant fear ad will to life. You are apparently speaking of ghosts, so it's ...

hmmm this is really touching. It's like describing a single instant of the entire existance. It was very special and new, I thought you held a perfect moment of love ...

I hate it when big business destroys the earth and the fruits of her should be it's labor. I don't agree with emm, it's important to open your hidden wounds ...

awwww your essay brings up a beautiful relationship with your aunt. You have described what really makes her an interesting person, and that has contributed in making her seem special ...

Actually it's not that hard to understand. It is true that you wrote seperate ideas and scattered images that cannot really be related. But hey are all sad, you have ...

The first poem: It was okay, very strange and a little laim though. I felt as if you were lost between describing the breath-taking scenes in your mind and the ...

Ad im laying here my blood glowing...you either meant"and" or most likely "as" You have a beautiful weird combination of fantasy and reality. You have combined an impossible dream with ...

No you don't, it's amazing. Every other thought roaming in your mind is another page of agony to someone. Never stop writing, and once you have the words rush to ...

"but my family don’t" should be doesn't, because you did not say family members reffering to many people, so keep it singular. Other than that I laughed myself out, you ...

hmmm this is a very interesting complicated story. I like it, but I thought you were in a hurry or so, everything was quick, try taking your ime into the ...

I saw eternal love in your eyes I saw the everlasting purity and endless light Beyond the horizon where your warmth never dies Behind fantasy, like your smile, so serene ...