amandabanana1292

Oh Jumpyspot, you made me laugh, I'll admit. Of course she's awful. Of course it seems forced (ancient societies throughout history has showed us that certain aspects in life are ...

Thanks for the great feedback, zsmith! I've never quite done this before when it comes to creative writing, so this is all new to me and you gave me some ...

Thanks for the tips. After I posted this section I realized that I didn't reach the part where I describe the characters. And it's definitely my downfall. I'm not very ...