amandabanana1292

Thanks for the tips. After I posted this section I realized that I didn't reach the part where I describe the characters. And it's definitely my downfall. I'm not very ...

I know it's rough. There's things that need fixed, but I would like to know what you think. I have more than this but I'm putting this much up to ...

I really like it. There's not much to it because it's just an excerpt, but I like the detail. That's my downfall, so it's nice to read something to try ...

I really am intrigued by this story. Rarely do you find a story from the villain's point of view. It's nice to see something outside of the box. Now this ...