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I loved this story. I would love to read the rest of it, that is if you continue it. There were only a coule mistakes that I noticed. Well, I ...

I really loved this piece I thought that it was great. I loved all of the imagery and description that you used on here. Also, you are really good at ...

Chapter 2 My eyelids fluttered open. Nothing had changed since when I had closed them. Mother was still drinking coffee and driving, and the car was still an ocean of ...

Oh my gosh. I loved this. I think that is so funny. Maybe you should really think about taping that and put it on Youtube. I think that it is ...

I loved this poem I just think that there needs to be more description on the first to scars. There's the whole rest of the peom that is developing the ...

I loved the whole abusive boyfriend thing, and how she stood up for her self at the end. I think that showed real female empowerment! :lol: I think that you ...

This is just the begining of a ghost story. So I thought that I would just ease into it, instead of just jumping into ghosts.

Being Remembered Chapter 1 The engine drummed on mindlessly. My eyes drooped with lack of sleep, I didn’t want to close them, I didn’t want to have another horrid nightmare. ...