alyssatan

So my friend wanted me to write something for them off the top of my head, and this is the prompt they gave me: "You're a person in a world ...

It was like seeing my life in a high-definition movie. Everything magnetized, every detail so clear-cut and precise that it was almost blinding. I was nauseated by the lurid brightness ...

So cliche. If you're going to write an immortal or vampire story, there needs to be something unique about it. I know this is only a sampling, but if you ...

So to be honest this chapter was a bit of a disappointment for me after reading the first one. I was drawn in before, I wanted to know what happened ...

Thank you thank you everyone! :D I don't mind critique at all; I actually appreciate it very much. I've been through the phase of posting stories on MySpace and hearing ...

I'm going to get my grammar issues out of the way first. There were quite a few instances, including in the title, when you wrote insomniac's without an apostrophe. When ...

In all honesty I was a little confused throughout the entire thing. The writing isn't bad, but the storyline doesn't make much sense to me, if there is one besides ...

Hello all. My name is Alyssa. :] I definitely want to become a famous novelist someday. My favorite author is Oscar Wilde. I also very much enjoy anime and video ...

She stared into the soiled white folds of her pinafore apron. They look like waves, she thought. An ocean of pearly ivory cream, caught in a still photograph. It’d be ...