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Re: Only Hope
Wonderful poem! I really like it! It has a nice flow and it rhymes nicely. Good topic! I love this! Good job and keep up the great work!
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Average Teenage Mentality?
Not bad! Very true! I agree with you 100%! I like the poem a lot. Good job and keep on writing!
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Again with the love thing...
You could make this poem longer but it's so sweet. I can relate! I love the last two lines. I agree with you that age doesn't matter when it's love. ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Time for a change?
Harsh ye truthful in a way. It's a nice poem and has a nice flow. The format is very different and unique, I like it. Keep on writing!
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: I miss you
Thanks to all of you! I must admit I'm in a very cliche situation right now. I'm not the best poet. I know almost nothing about poetry and I'm just ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Expectations Falling
I really like it. I don't always read about this and it is very easy to relate to. Lovely poem! Keep up the good work!
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: I miss you
I am unspoken. I am broken. I am alone. Please pick up the phone. I feel so blue. I just miss you. Do you miss me too? You are so ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
I'm back from the dead :smt006 ! Ha ha ha! Not seriously. I've been off for a few months. I was going through some personal issues and I had a ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: White lines
Amazing poem! Wonderful flow and you rhyme beautifully. This has a lot of potential. Just work on punctuation and capitalization. It's a serious topic and you did a really good ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Love. It's all i think about!!
It's a sweet poem. I like it a lot. Nice job!
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Before You Know It
You're writing is deep, beautiful, and intriguing. It's like a look into your mind. Very unexpected!
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Liar
I love it! The poem just has great flow and rhymes nicely.
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Toleration.
Wow, I think this awsome. I really liked it. I think this poem is very descriptive and emotional. All I can say is I thought it was a wonderful poem. ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter one
Okay let me start by saying sorry for not reviewing this sooner and I might not be the best at reviewing. Anyways, I really liked the story. I think it's ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: No More
I really like it. I can relate to it and it isn't bad at all. Good job!
Apr 27, 2011
