alter!ego

I loved your poem, and, although short, I really get what you are trying to say. I mean, the end was a bit cliche, I think I have ended a ...

His appearance matched all expectations of him i honestly dont like this sentance at all, it sounds a bit awkward. It may just be me, bit i would nix it. ...

i liked it. i am about the biggest alice in wonderland fan, so your title most definantly attracted me to your poem. i liked it. the poem didnt make much ...

i liked your grabber. im not sure how it relates to the story, but it was very creative. I dont know if its just me, but i cant seem to ...

i found this piece great. I thought you did a great job on describing things. Sure you could have said elaborated on what the house looked like, but i think ...

i really liked your story. It is confusing, and i hope you post more so i can have a better understanding of it. Your description in the first couple paragraphs ...

Hey! im new, and and im not that good with grammar, so... The only thing that was out of place was her green thongs. this sentence just awkwarded me out. ...