alter!ego

I loved your poem, and, although short, I really get what you are trying to say. I mean, the end was a bit cliche, I think I have ended a ...

big shakespear fan. I approve! I am excited to read your work. I have the same problem. All my characters come out having someone around them die, or other depressing ...

how this site really works. ive commented and ive submitted, but i dont have any readers. lol its making me mad! i came here to have my work read, but ...

how are you in college even though your 17? i dont get it...

how are you in college even though your 17? i dont get it...

its beautiful. how did you do this? i would enjoy knowing. i think maybe to add more to just a black background, you should put some light behind it, so ...

His appearance matched all expectations of him i honestly dont like this sentance at all, it sounds a bit awkward. It may just be me, bit i would nix it. ...

i liked it. i am about the biggest alice in wonderland fan, so your title most definantly attracted me to your poem. i liked it. the poem didnt make much ...

i have the same problem. im a junior and i just joined a class. i used to be so scared, but then i realized, if i want to be a ...

lol, i knew thongs sometimes meant flip flops, but i didnt know g strings mean it too. haha. well that statement is funny whether you said thong or flip flops.

(You dont have to read this before the story, prefferably after.) This is a true story, though it is not about me. Therefore I cannot write this in 1st person, ...

i liked your grabber. im not sure how it relates to the story, but it was very creative. I dont know if its just me, but i cant seem to ...

i found this piece great. I thought you did a great job on describing things. Sure you could have said elaborated on what the house looked like, but i think ...

1) have to admit, it is an amature photo, but it is still beautiful. 2)i dont like it. lol, just because it doesnt mean anything to me, you know? 3) ...

i really liked your story. It is confusing, and i hope you post more so i can have a better understanding of it. Your description in the first couple paragraphs ...