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These are great! Okay here's mine: "He drew and fired in one motion. The outlaw fell to the ground. Dead. The hardened cowboy's eyebrows narrowed. He'd seen dead men before, ...

With a little modification this might work as a rap or a song lyric. I'm totally new to this so I had no idea what to do with punctuation and ...

I liked this poem because it really seemed like you were searching within yourself as you wrote it. "Alone and Solo" seems a little redundant, but I hesitate to critique ...

Wow, that was really beautiful. I just have some suggestions that might make easy quick fixes (should you choose to heed them). You used a lot of great imagery, but ...