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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Colorado with My Best Heart

    Thanks for reviewing Kaiden!! I might go back to it when I have time. But I just really like this poem

    Sep 29, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Colorado with My Best Heart

    Clouds are cracking Blood is dripping But I am in Colorado with my best heart Eyes of crystal green, sometimes blue He is my best heart Tan skin and lean ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Disappear into Seas and Stones

    I purposefully spelled out hopeless as hope less. And I probably have punctuation errors but just let me know what you think please. Hope less broken soul Speak to me ...

    Aug 27, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: I Do Not Like Megan Fox

    I think that she is very beautiful, yes. But her being in few movies doesn't mean that he talent is bad. Shes only been in three! That's not true. Megan ...

    Aug 27, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Where are my memories?

    I love this. Its simple and tells a story. The chorus--Where are the times when I five swinging happiley on my old apple tree waiting for my nice hot tea ...

    Jul 21, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: California Night

    -- wrote the bridge before a thunderstorm last year-- just somethin fun. enjoy! and review Lets pack up our bags and leave this place Our worries are behind so we'll ...

    Jul 19, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Fraises J'aime vous

    I moved this from Other Poems-- I didn't feel it belonged there. Please review Have a strawberry Picked in the day Ripe with juice Oh, sweet I say Red and ...

    Jul 19, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey everybody

    Giant squids scare me. But the unknown can be amazing. Welcome!!!!

    Jul 10, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Tomorrow May Change

    Empty prayer disappear Let me know if he is near Only love, but not queer Only he should be here The one who will patch my heart His eyes can ...

    Jul 10, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Frankie Jankie

    If you can, take off the flash. I know you had to because it was dark outside but, once again, try messing with the time of the day. Anyway, if ...

    Jul 8, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Girl From Twilight?

    thats how Kristen is. She's awkward to death

    Jul 8, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: I Do Not Like Megan Fox

    She's never going to be the actress Angelina Jolie is, that's for sure. I'll admit Megan Fox has an enviable figure, but her face isn't anything extraordinary, really. Plus I ...

    Jul 8, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Call Me By Your Name

    Wonderful passionate novel penned by Andre Aciman. I could fall in love with it because it is very beautiful and his writing style stands out. It's a hardcore novel at ...

    Jul 8, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello Aloha Ciao

    So tell us a bit more about yourself. What kind of music are you into? Favourite writers? Favourite food? I love and am inspired by all kinds. Dance- Britney, Lady ...

    Jul 8, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Blood Fire

    I read the second poem you wrote and I can say, that you don't belong to average people. I totally appreciate that comment. And Thanks Macs and Christine. Any more ...

    Jul 7, 2009


Death is cheap, and so is life, but a reputation is not easily recovered.
— SirenCymbaline the Kiwi