alohajuice

When I peel back your skin, I'd better not see your heart whimper with complacency. I need somebody with an electrical socket embedded in their skull, and whose dreams are ...

There’s something about weather , whether it changes your mood or not. The wind blows trees from here to there , their leaves being to rot. I pull out the ...

I’ve been broken I’ve been beaten I’ve been left bruised and bleeding this pain is yet another hurt another strife another tear to fall I’ve seen dark waters dancing in ...

this was really good. I like the simple title too. The first stanza was my favorite part, it showed your sincere feeling for this guy and a characteristic about him. ...

Dude this was really cool. and fresh. It def. had energy to it. It read sort of like a rap like the guy above me said. My favorite line:But if ...

"Either buying treats for himself or for the ladies in his family" is not only somewhat creepy (who calls the women in their family ladies?!) but it is also not ...

This is just awesome. Call me a geek, but I couldn't help thinking of "Supernatural." (Which is a good thing, by the way!) I like how it was gritty yet ...

My question is why would she kill him? Obviously she is crazy, but there has to be some reason behind it. My only hint of advice is that you make ...

brill that mate what? Wow, that's scary. And deep. I think you did a good job, next time I look in the mirror I'm going to be thinking of this ...

I stare at the white walls the silent tears drip from my face I look into the small mirror my face pale for not having seen the sun my light ...

Hello. I'm new to this community. This is my first entry. Thanks for reading :) ------------------------------ The Sea Contemplates the Moon There is no space between where your silver rim ...

This was very interesting. I wrote something similar to this so I wanted to check it out. I was impressed with your diction, your word choice stood out. My favorite ...

(Present time)-- Padma paid for the bill with what little she had left. Then she slipped herself some raggedy pill in an attempt to induce sanity regarding the night’s events. ...

This simply one of the most darkest poems I have ever read! I have to say that you have definitely captured a haunting element that kept me on the edge ...

writers are sexy! love y'all