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Re: White Christmas
White Christmas Setting: 1950’s before Christmas time. Story: A cool-as-hell guy named Charlie falls for a girl, who lets him be his true self before school lets out for Christmas. ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: Moonboy
Thank you all for your feedback. The inspiration for this piece comes from the novel Stargirl by Jerry Spinelli. I wrote it towards the beginning of summer. So the title ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: Mary Christmas
Mary Christmas all alone, Right next to the Christmas tree. Standing in the cold with her Wise Man's gold, In her red dress and a Gucci vest. Standing all alone. ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: If I Must Die
If I must die, then let me die Soaring upward toward the sky; And at the zenith of my flight, Cross from darkness into light. If I must go, then ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Wannabe Good Guy
Men. Men men men. What a filthy taste on your pristine lips. I love these first three lines. Your eyes look so cold, A warmth is hidden. But I see ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Frost
I walk past the park where children laugh And take my leave from the city street, my face and hands buried in my coat. this sounds awkward. On these cold ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: "Are You Angry With Me?"
It’s the silence that you pull around you while you check your emails, the silence that makes a goldfish bowl around you while you sit and knit. this doesn't make ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Y.O.U
Laugh at me if you want to Hide from me if you can hehe Let me sink into you Like quick sand Chase me if you believe Stay here if ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Disappear
Thank you all for your kind words! I wrote it about that disgusting feeling one gets during/after a breakup. You just feel so disgusted with that person or with yourself ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Colorado with My Best Heart
thanks for reading my stuff rememberme! You are soo nice. I need to review some of yours when I can. and thanks for helping me out here. I wrote this ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Disappear
"Just disappear right now and don't come back." A star fell from my eyes and out of my mouth. I feel so disgusted. Disappear. Be gone forever. Pretty little liar. ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Moonboy
Sunflowers come in June. They don't like the moon; I always know. A stargirl told me so. A moonboy walked over and said I was wrong, The moon was everyone's ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Old Oak
This is a twist on a haiku. Enjoy:) Down on the banks where the Old Oak tree grows strongly There was a little girl who Sat there quietly Waiting for ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: Nonsense Smile
Three pigs, a girl and a sign. Yes I have learned to rhyme. While fat ladies sing, There's a square boxing ring. A fully sung hero. And upper class zero. ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: Sewers
This is a poem i wrote for English, but i thought that i'd post it. I'm not sure what type of poem it is. It might be free verse, i ...
Oct 28, 2010
