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thank you everyone for your kind words and your help. i enjoyed writing this one and i'm happy to share it with the world.

two years later and this still gets a review! thank you rememberme. Now that I look back on this poem I know that I can make it better. Thank you ...

This is very beautiful, like it belongs in there wedding album. It looks like a tumblr photo. Excellent color tone and the silhouettes look very cool

Great photo but it reminded me of a VITAMIN WATER ad. Even more so because your name Vitamincakes is printed right on it. The colors were cool, but I prefer ...

This was pretty as others have said. The color tone is perfect. I knew it was a flower once I saw it, but could not tell that it was specifically ...

This would be a really awesome piece of SLAM poetry. you just need to perform it with the right swagger and confidence. This had a really fresh idea and I ...

Ummm. This was very messy. I had two problems with reading this: the couplet rhyming and the disintegration of the couplet rhyming. First off, your rhymes did not seem genuine. ...

I love collabs. This one was interesting. Sadly I couldn't get to see the photo that inspired you, because the link led straight to a JOIN NOW page. It reminded ...

You told me you loved someone else and I ran like hell. I could have run straight to hell, but I never stopped running. Too fast for the devil I ...

it doesn't matter if your comment is short. Thank you for telling me how you liked it and how you felt. I like when writing is able to do that ...

merci harshita.

thanks for the FB. i wrote it on a beautiful day =]

It's over and I know it is But it smells just like you-- My old blue sweater. Yeah I see you over there staring at the clouds, Wonder-struck by rain ...

Thank you so much writeitalldown! I feel so honored that you feel that way. I really wanted it to connect to the general population, yet make it seem so personal ...

Hi! Honestly, when I first clicked on this, I thought I would see some poem expounding on how awesome Christmas is, lalala (no offense taken, I hope). I was pleasantly ...