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srry forgot to add "to you, right now" that s asituation right?

be stopped. what is truth?

cause that would make things easier. if a tree falls on a mime in the forest and noone's around does anyone care?

hey im new at this whole shtick too so maybe i can provide a helping hand. kay here's the nit picky specific problems I readied my crossbow, unable to fully ...

Banned for banning

oklay, i'm going to do my nit picky copy editor act (sorry bout it) The city had always frightened her with its sameness. first off don't use sameness. it just ...

well, I've been critiquing harsh so i figured i may as well present a target as well. this is the first piece I've actually posted.I'm not really fond of this ...

9/10. WOOHOO! NONCONFORMITY! :P

Hokay... I heard this was good so im here to critique it. The moment he walked in the door he was greeted by the lovely but livid figure of his ...

me and my harsh critiques (for which i apologize) are back! alright lesee... My mother walked over to me and grabbed the nearest brush. this is fine grammatically but it ...

oh wait i screwed up this isn't the first part. damn :oops: ignore the whole back story comments

Here i am to do my copy editor act. sorry if it kinda tears your work to shreds. just the way i am. I got to my feet, took a ...

Here i am to do my copy editor act. sorry if it kinda tears your work to shreds. just the way i am. I got to my feet, took a ...

Okay, I'm going to do my nit picky copy editor act. sorry, just the way I am. first off, syllable-wise, the whole thing totally skips around from comparative, adjacent lines. ...

Critiques wanted? oh boy! i get invited to poison pen something. :D alright here are my nit-picky problems with this. The Captain sat leisurely with his feet atop his maple ...