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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: New Haven: Chapter 5: What Lay Behind The Doors

    I think it's good, you could possibly try not to repeat the words 'They ran through' so much. On the third paragraph from the top you could take out the ...

    Dec 15, 2015


Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
— Gretchen Wieners