ally1212

Wow that was very desciptive. I have to say maybe a little too descriptive. Since it was so descriptive I found it a little hard to follow, but what I ...

Your poem was very interesting to read, mostly because most people wish to be perfect but you put it in a way that made being perfect seem so unnecessary. I'm ...

I think your poem was really good. I could understand everyline and where you were coming from. I don't have too much criticism for you but thats because I thought ...

That was pretty amazing. I'm a bit connfused but then again I'm always connfused. I'm not sure what I liked about it I just know that I liked it very ...

I really enjoyed your piece of writing. It was interesting to read and the ending was funny and great! You really knew how to express your emotions on paper which ...

Great job on this. As you may already know I am also entered in this contest but I don't see a point now because I have constantly found my self ...

I completly forgot to edit thanks for the reminder. Man that was dumb!

That was a really good poem. I liked how you thought of so many differnt things that have to do with the wind and how you compared it to differnt ...

As I walked toward the fabled Mirror of Erised I thought to myself. “Do I really want to see what would me happy? If I do see what would make ...

It was a really good chapter. I liked how you started the chapter with some of the other chapter but in a different charaters view. The way you ended the ...

To awnser you I would have to say that only the first stanzas need working on I hope that helps you enough!

Good job! I don't know what to say this is great and there's nothing I would change. You really showed us yourself and not just a tiny part of you ...

The ending to your poem was good and well writen but the rest was a bit connfusing. Your words didn't seem to flow as they should have and I would ...

I liked it even though it was slightly repetitive. I'm pretty sure that you were trying to make it repetitve but I think you went a little overboard. Other then ...

That was a really good poem and it rhymed too. It also has a really good message that was clear and understandable. I don't usually review poetry and my review ...