allikat98

Officer Mike Ross sat in the chair with his hands shaking in anticipation. He kept his eye on the door the whole time, waiting for Doctor Walter Sanchez to arrive. ...

AWESOMENESS! There are a few grammer issues, ones which have been mentioned in earlier replies (☻). I loved the reptition and how it all seemed to connect back to the ...

Amazing. I absolutely loved reading it and I added it to a word doc I have on the best poems. It turned out amazing, and I can't stop reading it. ...

Awesome! Kind of sends chills up my spine... :D I do agree with Crimsona, though, about the repitition and how "The Truth" takes so many different forms. I also do ...

Amazing! I loved your description, the rhyming, the rhythm, and the general theme. Awesome!!