alliecat98

hi im Alex im would like to review your story this is a really good story. I just had a few small comments. I feel it starts a little abruptly. ...

This is your first piece of poetry wow? its really good. the sixth line was a little confusing. Makes everything darker than it is seem, . I really enjoyed this ...

Hi there! I'm here to review your story I agree with Lauramydear- it was very good but a few sentences were confusing. In jail if you’re a prisoner there are ...