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alliecat98

  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General
    Re: My Savior

    hi im Alex im would like to review your story this is a really good story. I just had a few small comments. I feel it starts a little abruptly. ...

    Aug 9, 2013

  • Poetry » General, Other
    Re: Silence

    This is your first piece of poetry wow? its really good. the sixth line was a little confusing. Makes everything darker than it is seem, . I really enjoyed this ...

    Aug 9, 2013

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Escape

    Hi there! I'm here to review your story I agree with Lauramydear- it was very good but a few sentences were confusing. In jail if you’re a prisoner there are ...

    Aug 7, 2013


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