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  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Black Husk

    This is really powerful, I think the language and descriptions fit your genre well :)

    Jan 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Black Husk

    This is really powerful, I think the language and descriptions fit your genre well :)

    Jan 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Black Husk

    This is really powerful, I think the language and descriptions fit your genre well :) Linking the 'dark' to his sadness is a clever combination that flows. My only criticism ...

    Jan 20, 2016


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