akatori

this was really good. I kind of always wondered what Lennon's death was all about. "Limousine pulls up to the curb, a man in round glasses steps out, Yoko poised ...

Yeah it's too big for me to comment on the quality per say, but I can tell you that, as long as you have it scanned to your computer, you ...

the subject and idea is very interesting. I really think the girls' names, Rain and Calico, are creative. Just be careful with your comma placement.

I'm really sorry I hadn't posted the second chapter sooner... I've been preoccupied with other writing and the like, I completely forgot. I was happy to see that people reviewed, ...

This was first posted by me on under penname: Akatori-The Late Night Writer. All of this is cut and paste, so keep in mind I might be aiming certain A/N ...