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@soundofmind, thanks. :) I had to cut down on my word usage to make it concise, since I tend to write a lot of description. Can't wait to read the ...

Mkay, second post is up. If any corrections need to be made, I'm happy to fix them. Happy story writing, ya'll!

Gavi Iomar "What should we do?" Ceres said, her voice quavering just slightly. "Not really sure there's much we can do... There's no way we can fight against hundreds of ...

Second post is nigh unto completion! I'll probably finish it up later today, but you guys are welcome to hop over to the pad and look it over.

@Sheytato, awesome! I'd be willing to make the next post, but I don't know exactly where to take the story next

@Megrim, thank you! That's really, really helpful. Hopefully my reviewing abilities will improve in the future. :) Knowing some of my strengths and weaknesses is awesome. There's always room for ...

Well, this looks interesting! I'd love to try it out. (I by no means consider myself to be a great reviewer, but I really want to be able to help ...

Hey Phox! I have a few suggestions: 1. So your character is in a world of only animals and no humans? Why would he want to return to a human ...

@Holysocks, mermaids are the typical half fish, half humans, while sirens were originally half-woman, half-bird who lured sailors onto the rocks with their beautiful singing. The two types of creature

Hey-yo, all y'all peeps! So I had an idea for a series of comedic short stories. (Kinda more like a little world of different characters) Here's my idea The Realm ...

Sounds fantastic, @saentiel

I would be good with that! I'll get working on my character (although I'm not sure when I can get it up)

@Holysocks , I was thinking a creature that predominantly has a human form, but also has an aquatic form as well when she gets into the water. Not on the ...

Hey yo! If you still have room, I'd love to join! Not sure what kind of character to have though... What about a water nymph? Kinda like a protector of ...

I don't know how you guys do all-nighters. I did it once about a year ago at a youth activity, and I felt dizzy and weak the last couple hours. ...