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The way you move, the way you hear, the way your voice sings in my ear, on those lonely nights. The air in my lungs burns as I look at ...

"This is our decision, to live fast and die young... Yeah it's overwhelming, but what else can we do? Get jobs in offices and wake up for the morning commute? ...

Appearances are 'over rated.' So why do I still care? Everyones opinions, everyones stares. I've changed myself, more than I should. It brings back memories of my childhood. They made ...

What I read of this was very good! Almost poetic!!!!!!! Though I have to admit that i didn't read very far because i was getting ready to go somwhere at ...

No longer a poem!

Hey! Awesome poem! It totaly tells a great story, of love and sorrow, and so many things. And it really paints a picture! There was one place where I found ...

Hey! this is really good! i think your chose of words in alot of places were placed very carefully, and played together really well! Just a few things to point ...

No longer a poem!

Wonderful! As an artist myself, I really like this. It kind of has a statement to it. Even though I know it's just a self portrait. I think though that ...

This is exellant and true! I think the way you said america before every sentance though, got a bit reapetative. Maybe just put it like in the fist sentance and ...

I loved it over all! The end part was kind of off course and random cause it didn't really fit the rest of your whole rigm sceme, but the poem ...

Thank you so much That is so kind! :D

Hello everyone at YWS! I'm new to this site! I just posted my book 'storm of lies' and hope to get reviews for it, and I have been reviewing other ...

Sorry. This isn't a book anymore. It wouldn't let me delete the book. So I just did this.

Wow! The plot is great and the way you chose to place your words so carefuly as you did, made this all the better of a fantastic story! Your spelling ...